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Swapped) Chapter One: What Should Have Been A Normal Day...

This story is a Fanfiction based on the Lilo and Stitch Franchine, if you are unfamiliar with the title, I HIGHLY recomend it, because it is my childhood in a nutshell! (Lilo and Stitch is owned by Disney, I am just the humble fan-fic writter...Notice me Senpai! Pls! X3)
Hehe, anyways, this story takes place after the events of "Leroy and Stitch," and also ignores the content of the "Stitch" Anime, so everyone is still in Hawaii! (Like they should always have been, screwy anime spin-offs. -3-) This also has a twist, focussing on two experiments, rather than Lilo and Stitch. (And I didnt mean that Lilo is an experiment if that was what you thought the sentence meant. XD) "Which ones would those be?" You may ask me. "Plz Senpai, notice me!" o3o Welp, It's goanna be about two of one of my most favorite experiments, Slushy and Splodyhead. (Yey)
But yeah, and now is the part when I get to the story. o3o So sit back, grab some popcorn, a cup of Coke, relax, and read...unless you don't want to. -3-
(Also pls, enjoy, because...reasons...)
(Also just note that the experiments can speak English at this point, I mean, they got to have picked it up after so many years. =3=)




It was a fine day in Hawaii, school was out, Summer Vacation was in, Lilo and Stitch were chilling out in their home. Lilo (who is a teenager at this point, because it's 2015 so yeah xD) was thinking about how the two may spend their day.
"Hey Stitch?"
"Hmm?" Stitch looked up at Lilo.
"What do you think we should do today? It's a bright and sunny day, it would be a pity to let it go to waste!"
"Naga knows, Stitch bored though."
Lilo sighed and patted Stitch on the head. "C'mon Stich, how about we go and see if some cousins want to play?"
"Some cousins having troubles lately..."
Lilo raised an eyebrow, "Care to tell me about it? Maybe we could help..."
Stitch sat up, "Naga can help these cousins..."
"Howcome?"
"Splodyhead and Slushy just...naga knows how to explain in English..."
"They fight a lot because their elements are opposites?"
"Yeah...naga know what to do about it..."
"So...why did you say they were having trouble lately?"
Stitch stood up and sighed, rubbing the back of his head. "Cousins had fight about elements, got out of control until meega broke up fight..."
Lilo stood up. "Was it that bad?"
Stitch nodded. "Ih, Lilo, meega tell you story."




>Flashback<


Slushy was outside, hanging around. He looked over and saw Splodyhead walking with Stitch. He hid behind a tree and listened to their conversation.
"Cousin, want to play game?" Stitch asked.
"A game? What kind Stitch?" Splodyhead raised an eyebrow. "I mean...one that doesn't involve water, right?"
"Ih! Meega hates water, can drown in it!"
Splodyhead sighed. "Right up that ally with you..."
Slushy chuckled and made a snowball. Behind the tree, he threw it and hit Splodyhead in the back of the head.
"What the?" Splodyhead reached and grabbed the snowball. "Snowball...Slushy! Where are you hiding this time?!"
Slushy chuckled. He climbed up the tree and started throwing more snowballs undercover.
Stitch turned around to look at the tree and got hit in the face by a snowball. He pulled it off and sighed. "Cousin, megga see you in tree, no need to hide."
Slushy slid down from the tree and walked up to the two. "I got you good, didn't I!"
Splodyhead sighed. "Sureeeee you did."
"What is that supposed to mean?" Slushy raised an eyebrow.
"Nothing..." Splodyhead sighed. He muttered, "Elsa..."
"What did you call me?!" Slushy grew annoyed.
"Nothing man, just chill..."
"Whatever you say, you flamethrower..."
Splodyhead grew angry. "Take that back Princess!"
"I'm not a princess! You're  hothead!"
"Wanna fight, do you Jack Frost?!"
"How about you, Mr. Inferno!"
They two started to bicker greatly, words of offence were thrown left and right.
"FROSTY THE SNOWMAN!"
"FIREBALL!"
"DEEP FREEZE!"
"ERUPTING VOLCANO!"
Stitch sighed. "Cousins, break it up..."
However, the fighting continued.
"LAVA BREATH!"
"LIVING ICE!"
"FIRE-SPITTING CAVE RAT!"
"FROZEN-HEARTED TROG!"
Stitch grew into his full, alien form and pushed the two to the ground. "STOP IT!"
Slushy and Splodyhead sighed, but then glared at eachother.
"Cousins, naga fight ok?" Stitch said.
"But! He started it!" Slushy pointed at Splodyhead.
"No! You did!" Splodyhead pointed at Slushy.
"YOU DID!"
"NO, YOU DID!"
"IT WAS YOU!"
"NO, IT WAS YOU!"
"YOU!"
"YOU!"
"YOU!"
"YOU!"
"COUSINS STOP!" Stitch yelled.
Slushy and Splodyhead sighed.
Stitch shook his head. "Of all cousins, why do you fight?"
"Because...we just..." Slushy sighed. "We are meant to be opposite..."
Splodyhead scratched his head. "Yeah...we can't control it, it's in our deep...elemental nature to fight...besides, it's not like Slushy there would ever understand what I live with."
"It's not like Splodyhead here would ever understand what I live with either..."
Stitch sighed. "Learn to not fight...unless meega needs to get Jumba involved..."
Slushy stood up. "Don't worry Stitch...you don't need to take such...drastic measures..."
Splodyhead also stood up. "Yeah, don't worry about us, we have our own way of getting along...as in not really getting along...but umm, hey, as long as nobody getshurt, right?"
Stitch sighed. "It's all fun and games until someone gets hurt...anyways, meega needs to head back to house, promise you be getting along better?"
Slushy looked at Splodyhead, who looked at him. "Erm..."
Stitch was already walking away. "Later cousins!"





>End of flashback<


"Oh, so that's what you meant?" Lilo asked.
"Ih." Stitch nodded. "But, fighting continues, meega thinks Jumba should get involved"
Lilo shook her head. "Hey, I think we can do this without Jumba, let's just try and see."
"Oketaka, but how?"
Lilo smiled. "How about this? A cousin picnic, we invite lots of cousins, and we all have fun!"
"Sounds like fun! Meega likes that!"
Lilo opened the door to her house. "Stitch, I know what we are goanna do today!" (Omg 10/10 refference ooooh so amazing O3O)
Stitch followed Lilo out of the house, and the two walked down the steps of their house. They got in their buggy, Lilo would drive because she has a driver's liscence, and they were off. They drove around, visiting cousins, and invited several.
"Ok, so here is the list of who we invite, ok Stitch?" Lilo gave Stitch a piece of paper.
Stitch read the note outloud. "Sparky, Felix, Melty, Rueben, ANGEL (fanboy-like tone), Bonnie, Clyde, Slushy, and Splodyhead. Oketakka."
They went and invited all the cousins on the list, and gave them a time to meet at the beach. They could bring beach stuff and games, and it would be great.






At the respective time, all the invited experiments arrived. Sparky brought a beachball, witch had bright and vibrant colors. Lilo had her swimsuit on, incase she felt like hitting the ocean for some surfing.
"Aloha!" Stitch greeted his cousins.
"Hey Stitch, thanks for inviting us!" Felix smiled.
"Yeah, I was waiting for something new to do, I mean, don't get me wrong, I love melting cars and ranting about how people lack good insurance..." Melty said.
Slushy raised an eyebrow. "You do that? Like, everyday?"
"Most of my time, can't help it, these people really can't drive."
Lilo sighed. "Well then, how about we have some fun now? I've also got Nani and David grilling some barbaque later!"
"Ohh! Yum!" Rueben smiled. "Any sandwiches involved?"
"Maybe a grilled one..."
"This will be awesome then!"
Angel sighed. "You and sandwiches..."
"C'mon, these yummy pieces of life are what makes me myself, you know that!"
"Yes, we all do..."
Rueben chuckled. "So no need to be surprized!"
Bonnie and Clyde shook their heads.
"C'mon Rueben, high addictions aren't so good for ya." Bonnie warned.
"But sandwiches are healthy for you!" Rueben said, pulling out a random sandwich. "Isn't that right, Cheezy?"
"Where did that come from?" Clyde asked.
"Sandwich Ex Machina."
Lilo sighed. "And this is why I love hanging arround with you guys, when you get together, it's  always just so fun!"
Stitch smiled. "Cousins are great!"
"So, uhh, when can we start this beach picnic?" Splodyhead asked.
"Right now cousin!"
"Nice!"



A while later, the group of experiments were playing some sort of volley ball with the beachball while Lilo, Nani, and David were cooking.
"Pass it here!" Sparky said.
Stitch hit the ball into the air, and Sparky leapt up, Spiking it into the ground on the other side of the net. Felix slid forward to try and save it, but he fell short by just barely an inch.
"Aww...just my luck!" Felix sighed as he shook off the loose sand.
"That was a good try!" Rueben said, patting his teammate on the shoulder.
"Rueben, you're too nice."
"Pass the ball over so I can server it!" Angel called. Bonnie rolled the ball under the net to the other side. Angel picked it up and served it, the ball launching over the net. Splodyhead ran for it, but crashed into Slushy.
"DUDE! YOU MADE ME LOOSE THE BALL!" Splodyhead snapped.
"It was an accident!"
"Really hmm?!"
"I swear!"
Stitch coughed, trying to send a 'signal' that his cousins needed to stop with their bickering.
Slushy looked at Stitch and saw the message that Stitch was trying to send. He turned to Splodyhead. "I'm sorry man, it was an honest accident, please forgive me!"
Splodyhead raised an eyebrow. "You sure?"
"Y-yes! Total complete accident!"
"If you say so...but I'm watching you...Slushy..."
Stitch sighed, releived that a fight didn't break out.
The ball was passed back to the other side of the net, and Angel served again. The ball flew over, and Rueben punched it back. Melty ran forward and tried to spike the ball, but Felix successfully returned it this time. Stitch punched it into the air, and it went flying out of bounds on the other side. The ball rolled into some bushed, and everyone sighed.
"Oops, meega hit the ball too hard!" Sitch appologized. "Meega sorry!"
Angel sighed. "You need to lay off the coconut cake, it gives you too much sugar!"
"Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe."
Rueben scratched his chin. "Who wants to go get it?"
Stitch saw and oppurtunity. "Slushy and Splodyhead, would you get ball?"
Slushy sighed. "Fine..."
Splodyhead slowly walked with Slushy, reluctantly.







'Of all people...' Splodyhead thought to himself. 'I got paired with Slushy...'
Slushy sighed, trying everything to not have an arguement. "Do you see that ball anywhere?"
Splodyhead walked to a bush and looked. "Nope."
"Anywhere?"
"Nu-uh."
"Positive?"
"Are you looking yourself?"
"Yeah...look at me!" Slushy climbed into a tree and looked around. "I'm looking, and I'm not seeing!"
"Maybe because you are looking in the wrong place. The ball rolled in through some bushes, not into a tree! That would defy the laws of Physics!"
Slushy sighed and slid down. "I'm trying, ok?"
"Try to use that brain of yours, unless you can't because you have a life-time brainfreeze."
Slushy stopped walking. "Dude!"
"Just saying..."
"Oh yeah? Where is your brain hmm? I can't see anywhere it could possible fit in that weird-shapped head of yours!"
Splodyhead turned around. "You wanna fight man?!"
"Maybe I do!"
"One V One me mate!" Splodyhead got into a fighting position.
Slushy looked and saw the ball. "Oh wait, nevermind, here is the ball..."
"What?" Splodyhead looked over. "Oh...okay, let's just grab it and go..."
Slushy went over and grabbed the ball, however he could not budge it. "It's stuck!"
"Are you kidding me?!"
"N-no! It won't budge!"
While Slushy looked over at Splodyhead, vines started to grow around from the bush. They grapped him by the leg and pulled him into the bush. "H-help!"
Splodyhead turned around to see the ball still by the bush. 'And Slushy just ditched it...' Splodyhead sighed and went over to the ball. He tried to pick it up, but he saw that it was really stuck. "What the crap? How does a ball get stuck to a bush?!" Splodyhead tugged harder, but it did no good. Then, vines grew around his legs and also pulled him into the bush.






"What is taking those two so long?" Rueben sighed, eating a sandwich. "I've eating like twenty of these by now!"
"Actually, you only ate twelve." Clyde said. "I counted."
"Anyone think they got into anouther arguement?" Angel sighed. "They do that too often..."
Melty got up. "I'm not goanna just sit and wait, I'm goanna go and get them."
Stitch stood up as well. "Ih, meega come to."
"Better hurry, the barbeque is almost done, and I can't promise that it will last long with me here." Rueben chuckled.
"Be right back!" Stitch said as he and Melty started walking.









'What...what happened?' Slushy thought, getting up. He was laying down in a cave with Splodyhead, and it was dark and gloomy.
Splodyhead stood up slowly. "Ow...my head...Slushy...you ok?"
"Yeah...but where are we? What happened?!"
"That ball was a trap...maybe..."
Slushy looked around. "How far away are we from everyone?"
"I don't know...but we are lost here..."
"This sucks..."
"I'm goanna blame you for getting me involved in this, just saying."
"Oh, so it's MY fault hmm?" Slushy said, irritable.
"Yeah, I don't like blaming myself, and you are my favorite person to blame."
"Oh sure! Like you didn't have any fault either! You could've gotten help!"
"HEY! I THOUGHT YOU JUST DITCHED IT!"
"I COULDN'T HELP THE FACT THAT A BUSH ATE ME!"
While the two argued, a laughing sound could be heard. They stopped argueing, looking around.
"Haha...you two just cannot stop argueing!" The voice laughed.
"Who is there?!" Slushy asked.
"Who is there? It is someone who shall remain annonymous."
"What do you want with us?" Splodyhead asked.
"I don't want anything with you...I just want to conduct an experiment..."
"L-like?" Slushy asked.
The voice laughed, and then a shadowy figure holding a ray-gun could be seen. "I won't hurt you...I just want to see how this plays out."
Splodyhead backed up. "Slushy, this guy's got a ray! We'd better get out of here!"
Slushy turned around. At that moment, the man fired the ray, hitting Slushy in the back of his head. He collapsed, unconscious.
"Aww son of a trog!" Splodyhead exclaimed in dismay. He picked up Slushy and tried to run, but a second blast hit him in the back of his head as well, and he too fell unconscious.









'Ow...' Slushy thought, Slushy opening his eyes. He laid on his back, looking at the trees above him 'Was that a dream...?' He rubbed his head and sighed, 'Well...what a nightmare that was...' He slowly sat up and went to a nearby creek to splash himself with water, thinking it would help him wake up faster. However, it wasn't the water splash that made him snap into reality. At first, Slushy thought it was all fine, until he reached his hands out to scoop some water, seeing that they were red. 'My hands! They-What?!' He looked at the river, at his reflexion. However, he didn't see his normal, icy self looking back through the water. Instead, he saw Splodyhead.
"What?!" Slushy exclaimed, shocked. He lifted his newly red arms to his face. "N-no...no...this can't be happening!" He ran back to the place where he woke up, to see his body, now Splodyhead, still asleep.
"No...no no no no no no! Not happening! Not happening!" He freaked out. He shook Splodyhead to wake him up. "Splodyhead! Get up!"
"Huh..." Splodyhead slowly got up. "Am I crazy, or am I being woken up by a clone or something?!"
"Neither." Slushy grabbed Splodyhead and took him to the creek. "Look into the water, and then talk to me."
Splodyhead looked into the water. "What?! Slushy?! What?! WHAAAAT?!" Splodyhead lifted his now blue arms to his face. "WHAT WHAT WHAT?!"
"Did that shadowy person do this?" Slushy asked.
"I...I...I..." Splodyhead freaked. "I'm you?!"
"And if you are me, and I am you..."
"...Then that means..."
"That ray the person had switched our minds!"






To be continued. .-.
Omg yay first chapter :D
(Ok erm, it's exciting for me because yay!)
All characters own by their respective owners, and my spell/grammar checker and story writting partner shares this account with me, so ya, we work together! =D
Anyways, pls enjoy the story! <3
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After reading the first chapter I can say, that this is really good, especially for oyur first fan fiction. :D
Swapping Slushy's and Splodyhead's minds seems to be an interesting idea and it can turn out quite well. As Slushy stated they both act like contradicting elements and therefore fight all the time. Considering they both said, that the other cannot understand him and never will...well...it turned out, that they actually can. XD

But there are still two things I want to mention. First of all: It would be better not to include author notes during the text, unless it is really important for the understanding of the Story. Like a translation for example. It simply breaks the reading flow otherwise and might even destroy the mood.
Second thing: It is really good that you got yourself a beta Reader to re-read your story and correct mistakes. ^^
I would still recommend to re-read, as I've spotted a few spelling mistakes here and there. They're not to be big though and didn't bother me that much actually (especially since I would do worse anyway XD).

But now to my favourite part of the story. I loved the  scenes where Slushy and Splodyhead were arguing, most notably the fight during the flashback scene! It was like two grade School children arguing, as they were  like !You started it!" "No-uh, you started it!" "No way!" and so on. XD
I also got a feeling about who could be behind this mind swapping. My theory is that Stitch secretly got Jumba involved and so...yeah. Jumba did it. Just my theory though. ^^'

So far, so good. I enjoyed reading the first chapter, as I think it turned out quite well. I will definitely continue reading the fan fic. Have a nice summer! :)
(And again: Without melting. ;) )